Everything’s an
Argument - Chapter 16
Academic Arguments
This chapter contained a lot of helpful information, even if
most of the information was basically things we should already know, it was
good to get a reminder. There are so many things to consider when writing
academic arguments. I liked how the chapter first provided information and then
gave an example. Something I found very helpful was the information about how
to organize the paper, where to put the strongest evidence, and how to balance
my own words and arguments with arguments from a source.
One thing I have never thought about is that even if the
teachers decides the topic I can still make it match with my interests. I have
always been writing what I think the teachers expect me write, instead of
thinking outside the box and making the assignments more fun. Working with a
topic that I find interesting is so much easier than something I don’t care
about.
One thing I need to work on is editing and proofread my
text. I need to be better at reading through what I have been writing, and not
just reading it, I need to look closer for mistakes and misspellings. I need to
be better at not rushing through it; I need to take the time it requires.
The first academic argument sample “A Directive Approach
toward ESL/EFL Writer” by Brian Raidy, was very good. I liked how they point
out his thesis statement, his evidence, and his arguments next to the
paragraphs.
Understanding
Rhetoric - Issue 4
Arguable Assertions
Most things in this chapter made a lot of sense. I have
always used both sides of an issue when presenting my arguments. Because you
bring up both sides of an issue doesn’t mean that you necessary have to agree
with both sides. Just like they say in the chapter it’s not always about what’s
right and wrong.
In the end they talk about that a paragraph is like a
sandwich, and that you need the different components to make the paragraph
whole. Your arguments need certain parts to work, and without all the
components there is no paragraph.
Shitty First Draft
Writing… where should I start? Writing makes me terrified
sometimes, depending on the assignment. Reading this chapter made me realize
that I need to stop trying to write a “perfect” first draft. I can sit down
trying to write a first draft for days… just because I try to get it perfect
the first time. With that said, I have always had a problem writing a first
“shitty draft.” Since I need it to be perfect from the beginning, which I know
is impossible. Even if I know it’s impossible I find it hard to just start
typing. I get anxious before I start writing, but in the middle of the writing
process I think its fun. I like writing, especially about things that I find
important and interesting.
“The only way I can get anything written at all is to write
really, really shitty first drafts”(Lamott p. 1). This is a quote I’m going to
try to keep in mind whenever I try to start writing something. No one has to
see my first draft, and then I can turn in a better second draft. Hopefully it
will make me less anxious about writing.
They Say, I Say -
Chapter 7
So what? Who cares?
Saying why it matters?
This chapter was very interesting. It gave me a lot of new
information that I will have to work on. I know that you should always ask the
questions so what? and how cares? I just didn’t know how to do
it or how to get the right answer. I feel like teachers have always said that
we need to answer those two questions, but never told us how to do it.
“The templates not only demonstrate that other care about
you claim but also tell you readers why they should care” (p. 99). I wish I had
learned about these templates before, it would have made a different in my
writing process. The templates were easy to understand and hopefully they are
as easy to use.
I used to get anxious writing first drafts too. But youre right, nobody has to see the first draft...it can be just for you as the writer to get content down on paper. I also like knowing that even the best of writers face feelings of doubt as they begin the process. The start of a paper always seems so vast and confusing. I like the quote you are choosing to remember in regards to a first draft!
ReplyDeleteI also really like that you are taking personal note to think "Outside" the box. Whatever knowledge and interest you have thus far in life can surely be of use in your writings. I dont think keeping your creative self constricted will bring about your best writing... so two thumbs up for stepping out the box!